Great illustration. Does it have to rhyme? I've only read a few of your posts, but you have a great writing style. Informative comedy. A book like that, aimed at young readers, I think would appeal to a wide market.
Hi guys. Your idea is good. Here are some thoughts based on having a 3 1/2 year old granddaughter who lives in Japan (yes I know that makes me really old and I realize she may be too young for this in any event): Maybe the poem is a bit long. Also, there are a few words that could be difficult; hues, galore, astound, spree, spiritual. I am not being critical of the idea, I just want to be helpful. Maybe for an 9 or 10 year old, something like that? But again, I like the idea. How are you creating the art? AI? I will be in Japan again for about 70 days starting in October. Good work on this guys.
Great illustration. Does it have to rhyme? I've only read a few of your posts, but you have a great writing style. Informative comedy. A book like that, aimed at young readers, I think would appeal to a wide market.
We never kept up with it. Should pick it back up. Thanks for the nice feedback!
Hi guys. Your idea is good. Here are some thoughts based on having a 3 1/2 year old granddaughter who lives in Japan (yes I know that makes me really old and I realize she may be too young for this in any event): Maybe the poem is a bit long. Also, there are a few words that could be difficult; hues, galore, astound, spree, spiritual. I am not being critical of the idea, I just want to be helpful. Maybe for an 9 or 10 year old, something like that? But again, I like the idea. How are you creating the art? AI? I will be in Japan again for about 70 days starting in October. Good work on this guys.
Great feedback! Thanks for this!
Crazy, wild, surreal and a REAL treat. Do it, dudes.